I like the bottom part. Good item choices for the bottom ,but there are alot or negitive things in here. From the looks of it, its kinda pretty empty tbh. I really dont get the top part, I mean, where are the walls? The outside/entrance doesnt look too great. And using boxes arent the best choice. You should have adjusted the item placing and add more so others can learn. No offense but this place seems really dull. And some things look like spam. You know, like that random small box that looks lonely. Try to be Creative, because not much creativeness.
Honestly, most of what I have to say is basically why Lela said. The bottom is really the highlight of your igloo tbh! For your entrance I would suggest adding like 2 more ticket booths and adding a bit more flora. Okay so for the top, whats the deal with the random box!? You probably were just trying to fill the space (which is okay with me because empty gets on my nerves!) I would also try to put more wall exhibits. The couch in front of the pirate exhibit kind of seems random but it isn't. I honestly suggest using a different type of seating instead of the coffee couches. My last thing is whats with the horses? I think that should be replaced with something. The entire thing could use more detail. So I mean I like your concept but I think this igloo needs improvement. 6/10
Misses: but it is a bit dull at the top, the entrance needs to have more detail, maybe some seating for people who are old, you could use the timber flooring instead of putting millions of bowling alleys, there's a random box near the entrance.
Hits: you have placed most items neatly, there's some seating for old people, there's a boundary so no one can touch or break anything.
The thing that's bothering me the most is the emptiness, and this can be fixed very easily. I counted the bowling lanes, and there's 42 of them. If you replaced them with the maple flooring, you'd have 42 more items to work with. Besides that, the outside area/entrance could use some work, and probably take out that lonely cardboard box. But this igloo is pretty clean, so good job. :) 6/10
There needs to more displays, including paintings, I do like displays you have already though. I think the entrance should be at the bottom in the centre which would include a door. The outside part could be replaced for more displays. There should be walls as well as the back. The igloo is very neat though and well done for trying something new. I agree that if you used a different flooring, you could do much more as you would have more items available.
Amazing but for me I would like to see more paintings on the walls bc its not complete without all the paintings xd 8.5/10
ReplyDeletevery true XD
Deletealso if you don't know how to make a sleeping bed for your next igloo if you want use a rug and a beanbag chair :)
DeleteI like the bottom part. Good item choices for the bottom ,but there are alot or negitive things in here.
ReplyDeleteFrom the looks of it, its kinda pretty empty tbh. I really dont get the top part, I mean, where are the walls? The outside/entrance doesnt look too great. And using boxes arent the best choice. You should have adjusted the item placing and add more so others can learn. No offense but this place seems really dull. And some things look like spam. You know, like that random small box that looks lonely. Try to be Creative, because not much creativeness.
5/10
I love how u said Lonely box XD
DeleteHonestly, most of what I have to say is basically why Lela said. The bottom is really the highlight of your igloo tbh! For your entrance I would suggest adding like 2 more ticket booths and adding a bit more flora. Okay so for the top, whats the deal with the random box!? You probably were just trying to fill the space (which is okay with me because empty gets on my nerves!) I would also try to put more wall exhibits. The couch in front of the pirate exhibit kind of seems random but it isn't. I honestly suggest using a different type of seating instead of the coffee couches. My last thing is whats with the horses? I think that should be replaced with something. The entire thing could use more detail. So I mean I like your concept but I think this igloo needs improvement.
Delete6/10
Formatting is your problem 6.5/10
ReplyDeleteI like it,
ReplyDeleteMisses: but it is a bit dull at the top, the entrance needs to have more detail, maybe some seating for people who are old, you could use the timber flooring instead of putting millions of bowling alleys, there's a random box near the entrance.
Hits: you have placed most items neatly, there's some seating for old people, there's a boundary so no one can touch or break anything.
I would give you a 6.5/10
Keep the good work up!!!
For the misses i was suppose to say seating for the outside
DeleteThe thing that's bothering me the most is the emptiness, and this can be fixed very easily. I counted the bowling lanes, and there's 42 of them. If you replaced them with the maple flooring, you'd have 42 more items to work with. Besides that, the outside area/entrance could use some work, and probably take out that lonely cardboard box. But this igloo is pretty clean, so good job. :) 6/10
ReplyDeleteThere needs to more displays, including paintings, I do like displays you have already though. I think the entrance should be at the bottom in the centre which would include a door. The outside part could be replaced for more displays. There should be walls as well as the back. The igloo is very neat though and well done for trying something new. I agree that if you used a different flooring, you could do much more as you would have more items available.
ReplyDelete7/10
yeah i would but 99 items was upon meh XD
DeleteI agree with Harry - definitely use a different flooring so that you can dedicate your items to the displays and eliminate the empty feeling. 7/10.
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