OH GOD! (sorry about that) The kitchen is messy inside the food truck the flooring is not very nice, Im not a fan you used ovens for the main structure because they are very shiny and reed and it looks like the food truck will fall apart. Also I don't like how you used the rug for a road, Also the background in the back, (Its yellow.) It doesn't match plus, you need to make a color sceme for this Igloo, I feel like there are random colors everywhere that don't match. Instead of the stage, I recommend boardwalks, or weathered paths. In this state its a 4.7/10 It needs LOTS of improvements
10/10! I wasn't a fan of the tires when you first showed me this igloo but I like the use of them in this igloo now. I also liked how you added bins nearby for extra detail but also linking towards there being food involved.
CREATIVITY - 5/5 - Absolutely brilliant the use of items is the best I've seen in a long time
ORIGINALITY - 5/5 - The idea is fantastic even though I've never heard of it and the igloo follows the original idea with original use of items!
NEATNESS - 5/5 - Sure some parts are a bit messy but it's generally just minor jumbles. (I love that word)
COLOUR - 5/5 - Do I even have to say?
QUANTITY - 5/5 - Everything looks just about even.
OTHER FEATURES - 3/5 - Black carpet? Bins on the road? Footlight Stages? Cosy house transition into cityscape? I could point out quite a few more mistakes here but for now I'll just take off 2 points,
OVERALL RATING - 9/10 - A wonderful igloo with perfection almost everywhere. Almost.
bruh! dem tires are sqaushed! and dem houses in da bg look nice but wen u notys dat its opening to nyc it looks like weird
ReplyDeletethenk u fer yuh feedbek much apriciated
DeleteAwesome! The tires are flat? and i agree with mario the opening is weird. But its so original 9.5/10!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
DeleteOH GOD! (sorry about that) The kitchen is messy inside the food truck the flooring is not very nice, Im not a fan you used ovens for the main structure because they are very shiny and reed and it looks like the food truck will fall apart. Also I don't like how you used the rug for a road, Also the background in the back, (Its yellow.) It doesn't match plus, you need to make a color sceme for this Igloo, I feel like there are random colors everywhere that don't match. Instead of the stage, I recommend boardwalks, or weathered paths. In this state its a 4.7/10 It needs LOTS of improvements
ReplyDeletePlus The tires are flat :( (forgot about that)
DeleteThanks Geeing!
Delete10/10! I wasn't a fan of the tires when you first showed me this igloo but I like the use of them in this igloo now. I also liked how you added bins nearby for extra detail but also linking towards there being food involved.
ReplyDeleteThanks Harry!
DeleteThanks Harry!
DeleteLet's see how it rates on the joey-meter scale
ReplyDeleteCREATIVITY - 5/5 - Absolutely brilliant the use of items is the best I've seen in a long time
ORIGINALITY - 5/5 - The idea is fantastic even though I've never heard of it and the igloo follows the original idea with original use of items!
NEATNESS - 5/5 - Sure some parts are a bit messy but it's generally just minor jumbles. (I love that word)
COLOUR - 5/5 - Do I even have to say?
QUANTITY - 5/5 - Everything looks just about even.
OTHER FEATURES - 3/5 - Black carpet? Bins on the road? Footlight Stages? Cosy house transition into cityscape? I could point out quite a few more mistakes here but for now I'll just take off 2 points,
OVERALL RATING - 9/10 - A wonderful igloo with perfection almost everywhere. Almost.
lmao nice scoring system. Thanks Joey!
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